Tuesday, September 14, 2010

paragraph pitch

I've been reading a lot of writing blogs lately. There's so much information out there from authors, author-hopefuls, and agents. I've even stepped out of my comfort zone a bit and entered a few contests that involve "pitching" my book. The first one I entered had to be in Twitter format (140 CHARACTERS -not words- or less), and was really difficult. I didn't even come close to winning, but I learned so much from trying to squeeze all the information into that short space while still being unique and packing a punch.

The most recent contest I entered was a little longer- a paragraph pitch to be no longer than 5 sentences. It ends tomorrow at midnight, and then the agent will judge the entries. The winner gets a query critique or a first chapter critique. It's so fun and intriguing (and a bit intimidating) to read all the other people's entries and see what kind of books they are writing. So anyway, I decided to post my paragraph pitch here as well. Let me know what you think!
Here goes nothin':
Elliana thought the stories her abuela told her were just family legends. But when her clumsy behavior lands her in alternative school, obsessive-compulsive Jillian and mind-reading wannabe Javier help her delve into her own untapped power. While on a trip to Mexico to visit her grandmother, Elliana accidentally unleashes the spirit of an ancient ancestor, banished inside the binding tree, who has been waiting to return to power for over four hundred years. As the ghost gains strength by stealing the memories of her loved ones, it's a race between deception that's centuries in the making and awkward teenage self-discovery. Can Elliana realize her own strength before she loses her family- and their history- forever?
Thanks to Shelli at Market My Words for hosting the contest and getting my mind to work in new directions!


Memzie said...

WOW! What a wonderful pitch! You've definitely got me intrigued.

Cody said...

Spooky! I am very intrigued. Good luck with the pitch.

bj said...

I knew it, I just knew it....You, my dear, ARE going to be a writer. I am so thrilled that you've never given up on your dream. Stick with it...this pitch shows you have the talent needed to be an awesome author. And...when you're PUBLISHED, I get the first, SIGNED book!! :))
Love you dearly....
xo Memaw